Make a girl melt

Discussion in 'Politics & Religion' started by Babak, Nov 27, 2002.

  1. Babak


    "Leaning into the afternoons I cast my sad nets
    towards your oceanic eyes.

    There in the highest blaze my solitude lengthens and flames, its arms turning like a drowning man's.

    I send out red signals across your absent eyes
    that move like the sea near a lighthouse.

    You keep only darkness, my distant female,
    from your regard sometimes the coast of dread emerges.

    Leaning into the afternoons I fling my sad nets
    to that sea that beats by your marine eyes.

    The birds of night peck at the first stars
    that flash like my soul when I love you.

    The night gallops on its shadowy mare
    shedding blue tassels over the land."

    --Pablo Neruda
  2. Rigel


    Yet were her thoughts of him, and at times a feeling of sadness
    Passed o'er her soul, as the sailing shades of clouds in the moonlight.
    Flitted accross the floor and darkened the room for a moment.
  3. stu


    Yes Rigil very nice but I find the simple one lined poetry of my main chat up phrase never fails to woo them:

    You are now the only one who knows I'm not wearing underwear

    gets em every time, oh yeah
  4. Whenever I make a girl melt, they end up soiling themselves.
  5. When you can't be with the one you love, Love the one your with


    Wine is fine
    ......But incest is best.